Calling all critics

[QuantumJo]

I am looking for an objective review of my latest editing project. Please do not worry about being overly critical. I could not hope to find a more knowledgeable and diverse audience than the listeners of Aural Moon.
http://www.veradiiluna.com/Gamalon/Gamalon.html

[VAXman(Admin)]

Hey QJ, I checked it out. Think it looks pretty good.

How many cameras were there in todo?

Was the sound off the board? Sounds good but lacks some of the presence of a live recording.

What did you edit this with?

[QuantumJo]

Originally 4 cameras, footage from one was no good. The sound is from the 3 cameras plus the board. The board audio was mixed for the room. I edited it in Final Cut Express.

[Yesspaz]

Not bad. The only suggestion I'd make is to have more cuts. Each cut is about 30 seconds long. If there was an edit every 5 seconds or so, the pace of the visuals would match the pace of the music. Other than that, it looks good.

[Rick and Roll]

I got frozen after the first part. Got up to the point where they started the song. I'll try again later.

Man, that brings back memories. Is this an old show? Tell me more!!!

Love it when Tom introduces Geoff Perry, and Puleo steals it with his usual monster chops. George is King!

One issue I have, and this is a personal gripe, is the crowd sound. I can't stand it when people yell stupid fawning comments. Maybe if the mike was closer that would be cool.

The visual is excellent, nice camera work.

QJ, the man the legend who brings us the awesome GAMALON.

On a side note, I can't find "Held To The Light" anywhere. Suggestions?

[progdirjim(Admin)]

Originally posted by Yesspaz
Not bad. The only suggestion I'd make is to have more cuts. Each cut is about 30 seconds long. If there was an edit every 5 seconds or so, the pace of the visuals would match the pace of the music. Other than that, it looks good.

said the victim of the generation X/MTV generation

the cuts are fine. and Gamalon truly rocks....

[Yesspaz]

Originally posted by Yesspaz
Not bad. The only suggestion I'd make is to have more cuts. Each cut is about 30 seconds long. If there was an edit every 5 seconds or so, the pace of the visuals would match the pace of the music. Other than that, it looks good.

Said the man with a degree in Mass Media.

Originally posted by Yesspaz

Said the man with a degree in Mass Media.

I have a certificate in Hamburgerology but I couldn't make a decent BigMac so I got fired.

[Yesspaz]

ok, that's pretty funny.